: Use phrases like "furthermore," "in contrast to," and "specifically" to connect ideas and improve flow.
Years folded on years. Eteima’s cart became a permanent shop under a wooden sign that read only her name. People came not just for the cloth but for her stories, for the way she hummed while threading the needle, for the recipes she shared between bolts of fabric. Her lamp-name had done what names sometimes promise: it kept trying. eteima thu naba better
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